SirBladewind's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Game Grumps- They're Dead]

I remember when game grumps was funny...

It started right after Jon left. =)

Wakman111 responds:

lol i like both eras, it was and still is hilarious; but it's like comparing apples to an orange.

[The Girl on TV]

No no no. You don't sacrifice a SHEEP to raise Glycon the All Powerful. You have to kill a rooster!

Jeez bitches don't get anything right. :p

Sexual-Lobster responds:

sheep rhymes with sleep though. i would have prefered it to be a goat.

[Gamer - Shaping Staff]

Great video! I know you did the pacing for the song, but it was kind of funny/odd how he just stood there and watched as the crazy tentacle lady shot her tentacles out to devour him. Didn't even try to run or shoot her or anything lol.

Also, anyone else notice the computer in her apartment playing space invaders?

spacefader responds:

He couldn't resist the sensual touch she was laying on him.

[Menu]

This just confused me.

DieterTheuns responds:

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[World of a Civilised Duck]

I guess the world isn't different even if you were to switch roles...

Gerkinman responds:

Yeah I dont think anything would change.

[Say Sneeze]

It was okay. The jokes in it made me chuckle a little and the animation was serviceable enough to get the message across but not fluid or beautiful. The concept itself was a thing that was a little funny but to be honest I kind of expected it to be "meh" and "meh" it was. There wasn't much unexpected laugh out loud humor or any surprises and the pacing of the jokes was very slow. When you showed the car I immediately knew they were going to go off a cliff and it took what felt like a long time for the joke to finish. That kind of pacing takes the humor out and makes the animation a little bland. I know you had only 25 days to make it so that can be part of the problem but the overall product that came out was only okay, especially when compared to other artists and animations out there. I absolutely think you can do much better and I'll see what else you have to offer next when you don't have a 25 day deadline hanging over you. Please don't take my review as a personal slight, but rather I hope it motivates you to strive to the give the best product possible because when you release a product that just isn't your best you aren't just doing your audience a disservice, you are also doing a disservice to yourself.

Best of luck to you and I'll watch your animations in the future to see how you grow. =)

Brewster responds:

Thanks for the in depth review. The pacing of the jokes was something I wasn't really sure about. Once I added the song in there, everything changed. The shot where they're driving was a lot shorter and the shot with the dentist was a lot longer, but I switched up the lengths of both so it syncs up with the song. I guess the driving gag was pretty predictable and drawn out but I feel like it balances with the dentist scene's brevity. In any case, I'll keep working on improving. Thanks again!

[Cartoon Genders]

The audio quality ruined it for my i'm sorry. It was difficult to understand and your accent made it worse. A test that helped my friend in animation was he would play his videos and only accept the audio quality if he could understand each word perfectly in the next room. Perhaps you should do that to test next time?

Best of luck.

Pennaz responds:

That's actually a pretty clever idea! Thank you for your help, I'll try it next time I'll need dubs!