SirBladewind's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Fizzy Drink.]

I don't know if you were going for an artistic piece or a funny one but I don't really think it hit either in my opinion. While I do appreciate your vast and varied vocabulary (obviously you are well educated) I don't really feel that this video did anything particularly special. The art was good and the voice acting was excellent, but the meat of the video was nothing more than a rambling nonsensical rant of someone who was drunk off of a non alcoholic beverage. Could have been funny if it had more jokes. Maybe it could have been more artistic if the rant had more of a meaning than "this shit is good,"

As it is, it hit neither and ended up a rather amorphous blob of a video with no substance or structure to give shape to either story or meaning. I like your artstyle and Elspeth has a very lovely voice that I'd like to hear in future videos. Those are both positives, its just the meat of the story thats the problems.

My advice to you is I think you should perhaps set a goal as to what you are trying to accomplish with a video (IE: are you trying to make people laugh? Make them think? Entertain them with an interesting story? Confuse them?) and try to design the video around that purpose. You have some talent and with some work you could be a pretty awesome animator. Hell if you don't want to do the humor thing that could be good. 90% of newgrounds animation is humor related anyways. It would be nice to see something new out there.

Anyways, keep up the good work. I hope you found this constructive and I'll follow your videos because I get the feeling I'm going to see more of your work in the future. :)

Good Luck!

TaraGraphika responds:

1.Thank you for your advice. Yes, I do feel this is well constructive, your well educated yourself.
2.Elspeth is an AWESOME voice actress, believe that:)
3.Yeah, I'll try to accomplish a goal/message. The next video will have that. Promise.
4. Thank you very much for taking your time reviewing my work and to follow me on my videos. It helps a lot:)

[Lisa Killed Off Simpsons]

This video is absolute truth. Out of every simpsons character Lisa is my least favorite. She's bitchy, she pushes liberal agenda constantly to the point where I feel like I'm at a political rally, and all of her episodes generally are boring and super serious.

Funny as hell man. 5 stars. The part where homer's arms go all squiggly makes me laugh my ass off every time!

Also I know Bart was being a peeping tom but this was the first video in awhile you've made where nobody was actually masturbating. I'm kind of surprised honestly.

Speedo responds:

yeah i've done like 50 masturbation jokes before, I think I can lay off them for a while THANK YOU

[Current Time]

Hmmm

I'd like it more if the sky was synced up to the current time. Then I would find this fairly impressive.

As it is, eh, its decent.

Nickapassa responds:

Good suggestion, couldn't find the Action script 2.0 for that.